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i guess i'm following this web journal trend because it seems like a good outlet to me. and because it means that someone, anyone, may someday read it. i'm trying to learn to be honest with things these days and take some steps outside what i know, which means you may or may not like what i have to say. read it if you wish, comment if you desire.

Thursday, March 09, 2006

it's the breath before death
the endless breath
the most pain a person can bear

but death never comes
this breath never ends
fucking haunting my every step

2 Comments:

Blogger Enoch Guimond said...

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7:33 PM  
Blogger Enoch Guimond said...

It seems people only comment on recycled, inspirational platitudes; and in this one you drop the F-bomb besides! So I thought I'd say something.

Firstly, allow me to say, je ne comprends pas. *Wiggles finger and hunches himself up into a high-pitched voice* t I bet you have something specific in mind, but I can't find it . . .

Of course, the "breath before death" would be the last breath, and it could be (nearly) endless if, as in a short story by Borges, you have all the time you need to find peace, in that last instant before death.

But, no, the overall effect is, I would say, hardly hopeful. Good luck.

P.S. This is my first comment on a blog, so I fucked it up once.

7:35 PM  

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