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i guess i'm following this web journal trend because it seems like a good outlet to me. and because it means that someone, anyone, may someday read it. i'm trying to learn to be honest with things these days and take some steps outside what i know, which means you may or may not like what i have to say. read it if you wish, comment if you desire.

Sunday, March 05, 2006

in our moment of conversation
there was a comparison made
between me and eve

not beautiful and simple
not free and new
not alive and unique
not strong and brilliant

rather
the one who doubted and thwarted
who denied and lost
who disgraced and abolished
who was naked and ashamed

i'm sorry that you see me this way
oh you who i love so dearly

my desire is for hope
that perhaps love will one day be enough
beyond adams and eves and trees and snakes
beyond stories and antidotes and metaphors
that maybe you will see me and you as something more
something worth truly loving

1 Comments:

Blogger Joni said...

you express your heart so well and at the same time put into words some of what I have tried to for some time.

I just want to hug you!

4:08 PM  

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